Apparently my five-year-old daughter has been watching me edit. She got her hands on a page from my writing class and made some revisions. Aside from the three long lines and the doodles at the bottom, it’s pretty convincing. I think she’s got a career in nitpicking ahead of her…

I believe that the doodle on the bottom is actually her graphic representation of the comments that would normally be scrawled in the margins. Honestly, it’s easier to read than many of those comments ever have been…